WRITING CONTEST: Every Monday a new, interesting vocabulary word will be posted here, as well as a sentence using that word.

Your job is to create and post a new, better sentence in the comment box, using the same word. Yes, you may change the form of the word. Yes, I’ll be the judge. Yes, I am a subjective judge  ( I like clever or funny, I hate bigotry).

The winning sentence will be announced here the following Monday.

THIS WEEK’S WORD:    ~ fall ~

SENTENCE TO BEAT:  I followed the smell; the blind old dog, the dog I had tied pink ribbons on as a child, taken on bike rides as a kid, sobbed on her fur as a teen . . . that blind old dog had fallen and now lay rotting at the bottom of the dry well. 




3 responses to “WRITING CONTEST #13

  1. So many hopes and dreams crumbled as the ground painfully bellowed with black terror from the fall of the shining symbols of an American dream still hanging on for life 11 years later.

  2. We finally emerged from the trees, only to find a falling down two-story house perched precariously on the edge of a cliff, looking like a terminal old man that has lost the nerve to jump.

  3. Patrick Nelson

    He felled her with his jagged words, yet he did not hear her crash to the forest floor for she was painfully alone.